Wool

[xxjabberjayxx]

Name: Wool

Gender: Male

Age: 8 moons

Species: Snowy Owl

Kingdom: St.Aggies

Position: Warrior

Picture: thegrumpyowl.com/2010/03/03/blue-eye-snowy-owl/

Personality: Wool is a Strong Spirited Soul . And will fight for what he thinks is right . He is very strong not just physically but mentally he is also corageous

Strenghts: - Good Fighter
-Corageous
-Perssitant

Weaknesses: -Fear of Storms
- Moody

History: Wool was raised with his family until he was 2 moons when he was captured by a clan of ravens when he was forced into labour working for them . One day he managed to escape he kept flying through the air until he came across St.aggies


IC : Wool was exausted, starving and dizzy he had been flying for days but still he was glad to be rid of them troublesome ravens.He was about give up when a structure came into view he felt a surge of hope, but then, suddenly two black shadows wizzed by and then he was unconcieus .He woke up to see two masked figuers standing above him.They pulled him to his feet and he sat there staring into the face of what must have been high ranking owl "So he flew all the way here from Silvevail, must be strong" "So sir we moon­­blink him" "No hes strong we can use that well train him"Wool was startled for a few days after but got into the swing of things.

[Gabjas]

Welcome to GD!

I was wondering if you could possibly go back, modify this bio and do two things for me:

1. could you please change the title to simply Wool?

2. could you please check over the whole thing with spell-check so you can fix any errors or grammatical/punctuation-related mistakes?

Thank you very much! Also, IC stands for In Character. Basically, you just need to write a paragraph similar to roleplaying him. If that makes sense? You describe a scene and what he would do in that scene. If you don't understand, perhaps someone else can explain it better. XD

If you just fix all that up, this bio will be accepted! Thanks again.

[Sompom]

Gabjas,
I mentioned this in a PM I just sent you, but I'll put it here too. The official format for the name, according to the bio form, is "POSITION, Name". I actually created this topic from a post in a different thread.
If we're not using that format, we should change the bio form.
-Sompom

[Gabjas]

I was not actually aware of that before. If that is what the bio form calls for, then I will do my best to enforce the correct order from now on.

-Gabjas

[xxjabberjayxx]

OK thanks for that now it is done thanks so much i am SOOO EXCITED to get started from today thursday til monnday i am away in grananda so i can t reply sorry be back soon take care xx

[Gabjas]

Accepted! You may now roleplay.