Magnus

[littlewing]

PIT GUARDIAN - MAGNUS


Name: Magnus

Gender: Male

Age: 8 moons

Species: long eared owl

Kingdom: Saint Aggie's

Position: Pit guardian

Description: A long eared owl in his prime, brown feathers with black specs.Calm orange eyes give nothing away, unusually small sharp ear tuffs, which always point backwards.Slightly bigger than a barn owl.http://www.flickriver.com/photos/hard-rain/2154341739/

Strenghts:cunning, good eyesight, strong.

Weaknesses:mind wanders easily, proud, not a skilled flier

Personality: Hes a head strong young owl ready to sacrifice it all for his home, saint Aggie's.He wishes one day he will rule saint Aggie's and he will make it great.He is loyal only to those he calls his friends.He is cunning and devious always scheming.His most power full weapons are his mind, sharper than any battle claws and his tongue burns hotter than any coal

History: As an owlet he led a relatively happy life with his father.His mother died when he was born and thus is a lonely child.His father left one day and never returned.After 14 days alone an eagle owl swooped down and took him away to saint Aggie's.He thinks of saint Aggie's as his home.The supervisors took interest in him when he survived a moon scalding.They trained him to be a soldier in saint Aggi's

IC:Magnus looked down at the moon blinked owlets he was guarding.He had to suppress old memory's of when that almost happened to him, he reminded himself that it was necessary for saint Aggi es survival. He looked a cross the crowded room to see wolves sleeping at their posts, he sighed and continued his guarding.He heard something going by......it was
Viss and a small owlet trailed behind her, Magnus was confused, it didn't look moon blinked.Viss gave him a sharp disapproving look and he turned his head away and returned to his duty.

[littlewing]

Please could someone tell me what to do know

[Gabjas]

Hello littlewing, welcome to Ga'Hoolian Decree.

You have everything you need for this bio, but I have noticed quite a few spelling errors and a lacking of correct grammar or punctuation in many cases. Before I can accept this, I ask tat you please run over the bio using spell-check (which can be found as one of the icons when you modify a post).

When you are done, simply comment below that you have finished and I will check it over again.

Also, please change the title to just Magnus so we don't get confused. Thank you!

[littlewing]

Thank u so much its like a dream come true ill make sure i do that

[littlewing]

ive finished, and could u tell me how to start my own story or a new thred or join an already existing storie, and can i be a pit guard since i noticed the position was open, sorry if im bombarding you with questions its just that i love the legend of the guardians and im so excited

[littlewing]

oh and by the way whats cotm ant motm

[Gabjas]

Wonderful. Just one more thing I forgot to mention: I just need you to put PIT GUARDIAN - Magnus at the very top of the bio. Thanks.

Otherwise, this bio is accepted.

I remember when I first joined this place and I was SO excited, just like you! This is what you need to do:

1. Go to the bottom of the page
2. You should see a little rectangle just above the c-box that says 'Forum Jump'. Click that and scroll down.
3. Click on any place from Northern Kingdoms or below. (ie. Silverveil)
4. Click 'new thread'
5. Name it and write in it. Then click Post Message.

Does that clear everything up? If it doesn't, feel free to ask me more questions.

COTM stands for Character of the Month and MOTM stands for Member of the month.

[littlewing]

thanks for all you help gabjas ill contact jabberjay as soon as i can and tell him that you messaged him he will be in histerics

[Gabjas]

;D Haha, glad I could help.