Coliaby

[otulissa]

Name: Coliaby (Bee to friends)

Gender: Female

Age: 24 moons

Species: Strix Occidentalis

Kingdom: Guardian of Ga'Hoole

Position: Member of Search-and Rescue Chaw

Description: Coliaby wears a milkberry bracelet around each ankle. There are milkberries from each season on it. She also has a small scar on her right shoulder blade from her past.

Personality: She is very eccentric and kind. She is very intelligent like many Strix owls.

Strengths: She is very fast, smart and can resist a moderate amount of physical torture.

Weaknesses: She sometimes flies too fast to stop, is touchy about her parents and is vunerable to mental torture.

History: Colaby was born in Ambala. The daughter of a well-known owl, Strix Lygeia, she is very smart. On the night of her hatchng both her parents were killed by a rogue Pure One, but she was saved and brought to the Great Tree by a Horned Owl. She is now a member of Search-and Rescue.

IC: The young Spotted owl soared through the night. She spotted a large Tyto and felt her gizzard drop out of her. t was a Pure One! Her battle claws were no match for his. He turned toward her and she went yeep. He's not so bad she thought as he came to help.

Codeword: *starred out by Gabjas*

[Ayama]

Lovely bio, really. But could you space out the categories from one another? Everything is so clumped together and a little hard to read.

Also, not to sound snooty or anything but, do you know what eccentric means? The term seemed like it was used a little... oddly in the paragraph with her personality.

[otulissa]

Oh, I take offense! I am a straight A student, bar P.E. Of course I know what eccentric means!!!

[Gabjas]

If this was not already accepted then now it most certainly is; this was beautiful bio. Play her well.