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Batt the Barnowl Accepted Members [M:0] A new Owl arises from the Dead Posts: 181	Origins (comments and corrections) Dec 2, 2013 15:07:32 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Batt the Barnowl on Dec 2, 2013 15:07:32 GMT -6 This post is for the fanfic I have created. Please post comments on it here. If you spot mistakes in grammar please post them here.

Rylan Accepted Members [M:290] In five words, I can sum up everything I've ever learned about life: Despite everything, it goes on. Posts: 264	Origins (comments and corrections) Dec 2, 2013 21:30:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rylan on Dec 2, 2013 21:30:51 GMT -6 It looks good so far, but maybe adding a bit more detail and description would enrich it? Like describing the setting, the time, the owls, etc. I'm excited to read more!
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Batt the Barnowl Accepted Members [M:0] A new Owl arises from the Dead Posts: 181	Origins (comments and corrections) Dec 10, 2013 7:18:01 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Batt the Barnowl on Dec 10, 2013 7:18:01 GMT -6 I know, and thank you for telling me, but sometimes have creativity blocks sometimes, but still I try!